Talk:Turnabout Succession

Is this article too long? I wrote the article as I was playing (and actually, my motivation to replay this case was for the MASON System pictures), and that may have caused me to write down irrelevant details. I've attempted a trim-down, but the article is still enormous. The MASON System and final trial portions take up about half of the article, way more than I'd initially anticipated, considering that having eight locations to traverse doesn't seem to have made the chapter much longer than typical chapters. Then again, Phoenix does talk to a lot of people and extract a lot of information about two barely linked incidents. Maybe I'm just being paranoid, but this continues to nag at me a little and I may not be as good as editing my own writing as the writings of others.

Notable comparisons as of this writing:

Rise from the Ashes weighs about 18 KB, way less than half of this article, and yet by my estimation it's about half-done, and I'm pretty sure that the case is longer than this one is.

Reunion, and Turnabout, the previous longest article, weighs about 40 KB, almost half of this article. This gap was what initially got me worried. I mean, I know that this case is longer, but twice as long?

Nonetheless, other articles are of short cases and they're rather long, like the 24-KB Turnabout Beginnings and the 18-KB The Lost Turnabout. Maybe it's just an issue of inconsistency and different authors having different views on how much stuff to put into a case article.

capefeather 18:14, December 1, 2009 (UTC)